Editing as I Write: A Good Foundation for Revising?

I’ve noticed something with this latest work in progress. It seems I spent a lot more time editing than usual, insofar as I was editing as I wrote.

I wrote scenes then agonized over them as I looked for problems in diction, punctuation, point of view, and paragraph markers, including quotes for characters’ voices. I wrote chapters then looked for inconsistencies and plot holes. I spent a lot of time reviewing my first three chapters, since those are the ones that tend to draw readers in. I also got some feedback from a chapter member who was glad to take a look at my first twenty to thirty pages.

It seems that all this foundational work has made my revisions easier, but without sacrificing my writing time.

I made note when I began writing, a few days after I had my outline ready to go. I was proceeding at a reasonable clip until I needed to take a break because I was dealing with some real world matters that took me away from my writer’s life and my imaginary friends. Even then, the delays didn’t set me back. I finished the first draft at a time similar enough to when I finished the previous works in progress. My typical goal is to have the first draft done within four to six months.

Another important point is that I haven’t yet gone forward with publishing the first of the two latest works in progress. That has been helpful towards the revision process for this current manuscript. The two books are connected, so I have to make sure that I get all the details correct and avoid inconsistencies along with plot holes from one book to the next.

It will be interesting to see what my developmental editor has to say.

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Romance Writing: Prurient Interest in our Novels?

I saw some tweets not that long about Stacey Adams’ interview with Stephen Colbert: link. He was interviewing her about her political career. Knowing how high profile she is, one might have expected the focus to be on her background in law and public policy and a recent book she wrote: link.

Instead, he wanted to read excerpts from the romance novels she once wrote as Selena Montgomery, even though she didn’t want him to: link; link.

Romance writers and readers were indignant, and rightfully so, because he was feeding into a prurient interest in her romance writing that diminished her as a lightweight, as many tend to see romance writing as a silly women’s thing, as though love and companionship isn’t a universal desire.

It was as though Ms. Abrams’ novels was all that mattered about her, because romance writing can be seen as a reflection of the writer herself, and in very personal ways. Is she writing about things she experienced or things she has fantasized about? One’s writing can never just be an entertaining story.

Various authors noted that romance writers come from all types of backgrounds. They are lawyers, doctors, and professionals of all types. They tweeted the excerpts of their books they would have liked to hear out loud. They all referred to those where the heroines indicated their intelligence, strength and resilience, not just their characterization as sexual beings.

One writer asked whether a male writer would have been questioned like that about a thriller he might have written.

I thought that was an interesting perspective. Romantic suspense novels are the flip side of thrillers and spy novels like those written by Ian Fleming of the James Bond franchise. But we don’t see them as romance novels, because the stories are from the perspective of the male protagonist. The romance is secondary to the high level drama of the thriller. In romantic suspense novels, the heroine is not a secondary character, and the romance is part and parcel of the suspenseful story. Yet only one genre is dismissed as being less important. Only one genre is targeted for prurient interest.

It seems to me that the topic of sex scenes in romance novels fuels debates within the genre in important ways and it’s directly tied to the prurient interest in what we write. Those readers and writers who argue that women’s sexual empowerment is paramount are the ones who demand women’s sexual agency notwithstanding the dismissal which might follow.  Others believe, in turn, that sex scenes aren’t crucial for the development of a romance and that women’s empowerment can be demonstrated in other ways. So an author noted a criticism that she wasn’t really writing romances because her sex scenes were closed door.

When these debates abound within the world of Romancelandia, I think it’s important to step outside for a bit and remember that these discussions indicate some underlying tensions that persist in society about romance writing.

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The Punctuation Police?


Discussions among writers about punctuation sometimes seem like an exercise in extreme nerdiness! All kinds of talk about Oxford commas, em dashes, colons and semicolons. But does it really matter?

The significance of the debate didn’t come to me from a writing group discussion, although it was one we talked about in a recent @rwchat.

I read a New York Times article about the problems court reporters have in understanding African American Vernacular English: link. The lack of comprehension had major consequences for freedom as opposed to incarceration, as well as life or death.

Court reporters are charged with accurately reporting witnesses’ testimony at depositions and trials. They produce transcripts which become the official record of court proceedings. Writers are merely tasked with writing for clarity; diction and punctuation are the means of making sure our words are understood.

I was struck by an observation. The linguists who did the study played audio recordings for the reporters. The researchers then asked the reporters to write what they heard and to paraphrase as well. But they had a difficult time doing each. Yet, the reporters weren’t asked to punctuate.

The article quoted a defendant’s statement: “I know that I didn’t do it so why don’t you just give me a lawyer dog ’cause this is not what’s up.”

Reading it, I thought about how punctuation might have made the difference in meaning, but that wasn’t even discussed. If I were writing, how would I punctuate a sentence like that in order to convey the character’s meaning?

In oral communication, it is easy to understand pauses and what they mean. In written communication, punctuation matters more because they are markers that help explain the meaning of words, phrases, and sentences.

So “eats, shoots and leaves” is hilarious, while “eats shoots and leaves” is a mundane observation which doesn’t evoke the same imagery: link.

A misplaced–or even nonexistent–comma can change a whole sentence’s meaning.

An earlier version of this article appeared in my local RWA chapter newsletter.

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Happy Valentine’s Day!

I am a member of various writing communities on twitter.

A host of one of the writing games came up with an ingenious one, to write a love letter to one’s work in progress.

Here’s what I came up with, except it’s in honor of all my works in progress and books:


Dear WIPs,

You keep me amused, excited, and enthusiastic to be with you and my characters on my journey. You keep my imagination working overtime.



P.S. I love how you have helped me find .


You can find me on Amazon: link.

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Music and the Work in Progress

I might have mentioned that I’m currently using playlists on Spotify for my works in progress. In my books, I have tended to include references to the music that inspired me as I was writing. These are the songs that I thought might bring a scene full circle, but that is not always the case.

Sometimes a song inspires a scene, and it’s totally unexpected.

I’m at the gym a lot, I go to my local Planet Fitness. The gym’s management implemented a recent development of broadcasting music videos the patrons can watch on television screens. So when I’m not watching the news, I’m watching videos of the latest pop music.

I just love it. Sometimes I hear a song that draws me in some fashion. Perhaps it’s the name of the song, the melody, or the lyrics. Or all of the above. If the song appeals, I wonder whether it can fit into the Spotify playlist I have set up for each of my works in progress.

But when a song inspires a scene, it is as though I can’t get the song out of my head, because something about the song’s energy fits a scenario I imagine for my characters.

The latest source of my inspiration is one I can imagine will be the basis of the first chapter for the next work in progress. But I do not have the time to work on it now. I can only take notes and listen to Spotify.

My current hero and heroine are depending upon me, then my previous hero and heroine will be getting back to me soon.

I look forward to sharing my future updates.

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An Author in Search of her Character

Laurens e book cover resized

The newsletter editors of my Romance Writers of America chapter urged us to submit character interviews. I had fun imagining an interview with the heroine from The Wedding Bet: Lauren.


I get up from my seat in the Starbucks at Penn Station. “Lauren, it’s so good to see you!” I give her a hug and step back to take in her black slacks, red jacket and blue scarf. “I just love the outfit!”

“It’s good to see you as well.” She touches the scarf. “It’s a gift from Annelise (heroine of Starting Over: Rick). She and Rick were in town. Denise (heroine of Going Home: Roger) lives in New London too, so we all got together during the Christmas holidays. Lots of kids running round. Chaotic, but fun. Can’t complain. We’re all doing fine. How have you been?”

“I’ve been fine, the family’s fine. I’ve been getting to know some new characters. And you?”

“That’s great! I like Facebook, it’s good for keeping in touch with everyone, so I’ll check for your updates. Don and I, we’ve been married several years. The babies are getting bigger and I’m doing nursing part time. Gives me more time with them.” She takes out her phone to show me some photos.

I take it and study a picture of her with her children. “I love it, they are so adorable.” I return the phone to her. “They’re with Daddy this afternoon?”

She nods. “I’m sure they’re having some adventures. He’s so busy, it’s good whenever he can have down time with them. We’re still going strong. He’s doing great, getting promotions.” She smiles at a photo of him. “I just love how much he enjoys being a dad. Our family life is such a blessing.”

“It’s like a Hallmark movie.”

“And you made it possible for us!”

“So which television show would most resemble your life?”

“Something like Black-ish, I think.”

“I can see it! So if we made a movie of your life, who would star?

“Idris Elba as Don, it goes without saying! I would love it if Kerry Washington were to play me.”

“She’d be recognizable.” I notice the book she placed onto the table. “What are you reading?”

“Michelle Obama’s autobiography. Her story is so relatable.”

“I agree. She really speaks to so many women’s experiences.”

“That’s what I really like about you as our author! Perhaps it comes from your training as a clergywoman. Whatever it is, you understand us, our experiences and needs. Everything that has been important for us in getting our happily ever after. Like, you’ve always respected our privacy, giving us the closed door bedroom scenes we prefer. Annelise, Denise and I, we call you our honorary auntie!”

“Thank you, sweetie. That’s so lovely to hear.”

She hugs me. “You’re always welcome.”

We get our drinks and continue chatting until it was time for her to catch her train back to Connecticut.

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Writing Goals: 2019

I began writing the books in my sweet romance series in the spring of 2017. The first two books were out in August of 2017 and February of 2018.

I started Lauren’s book on New Year’s Day 2018, and somehow I thought I was going to get three manuscripts done during the course of the year.

It didn’t happen, but it wasn’t a major disappointment because I fell within my reasonable expectations. But I did have some delays in getting Lauren’s book out–the editing process took some time. In addition, I was learning and exploring other possibilities for publishing. But I was glad she finally came out right before Christmas.

I started my new inspirational series in the spring and I finished my first draft on New Years’ Eve. Delays again, I was hoping to finish during NaNoWriMo. But I pushed myself to meet my reasonable goal–based upon my experience to date–of finishing before the end of the year. The first draft is done.

So I began this year sitting in on the auditions of the characters who have been clamoring for my attention. They want to be the stars of the second book! Yes, it’s like that, as though I’m watching a stage with people coming and going. They read bits of dialogue and I see their prospective scenes.

I didn’t have this figured out until New Year’s Day. I grappled with it for several days! It was a cycle of reading, thinking, then thinking and reading again.

So I was outlining and interviewing my characters and only began writing on the third. The next heroine and hero are secondary characters from the current work in progress. The fun part is that one of them is more developed than the other. So I get to revisit them and see what they have been up to.

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New Release!

I’m excited to announce that Lauren’s book is finally available. Although the hero is Rick’s and Roger’s friend Don, I don’t think he minds that his story is being told from the perspective of his lady, Lauren Boucher.

So this is the third book in my sweet romance series, but it takes place in the year between Rick’s and Roger’s book. Lauren is one of Annelise’s friends, and Annelise, of course, is Rick’s lady.

Here is the link for getting Lauren’s book on Amazon.

See as well: Pinterest and Spotify.

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Laurens e book cover.

Traveling Light: A Writer’s Life?

I remember years ago having a fun chat with one of my pals about imagining traveling the world, but we could each carry only five things on us, just enough to fit into our pockets and with no luggage.

We came up with these five items: keys to whatever house we were each living in–or at least a storage compartment where we kept our stuff. In addition, we would need a passport, a credit card, a cash card, and a driver’s license. We figured that we could use our passports, credit cards and drivers’ licenses to go wherever we wanted to go and buy whatever we needed when we arrived. Whatever we didn’t want to carry, according to our no-luggage rule, could be sent back home by mail.

One month, two months, three months, who knows how long we would be gone.

I returned to this thought experiment in more recent days, and technology makes all the difference. If I were to imagine this today, I’d need not only those five things, but my technology! I would need a cell phone, some type of small notebook computer and chargers for each. One important new item would be a special travel jacket. Yes, folks I am so nerdy that I have thought about this.

Perhaps one that National Geographic photojournalists use, with enough pockets to carry all their stuff on them: Orvis.

But on a more practical level, I recalled this recently when I was away at a church conference last month. We were all checking out on the last day, there was a service taking place, and I was a participant. It was taking place outdoors, but I couldn’t carry my coat, since I was going to be wearing my vestments. I checked my luggage with the hotel staff, but what about the most important things I didn’t want to misplace? I was thankful for denims with deep pockets for my phone, wallet, keys, pen and note paper. I wore a wool hat, a hooded sweatshirt on top of my clerical shirt, a scarf on top of that, and finally, an LL Bean fleece jacket zipped up over everything. I only needed to be sure my clerical collar was peeking through.

All those years ago, I didn’t imagine what I would be doing as we traveled the world. Was I merely going to be a tourist? I think so. But if I had to talk to my younger self, I might have told her about becoming a travel writer. Or even a romance writer doing research on the ground. Historical novels, perhaps?

Alas, I have always been too practical to imagine the fanciful existence of traveling the world with only the clothes on my back. I’m firmly grounded in writing contemporaries, where my research is limited to the internet, and that is fine with me.

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Isn’t this Orvis travel jacket so cool?


Building Character: Writing what you Know, Researching and Having Fun

The editors of my romance writers’ chapter newsletter gave us a writing prompt to consider in drafting essays for the November issue of the newsletter.

How do we build our characters and their fun habits? Inspiration can come easily to me, so I don’t think it’s too complicated.

Our characters’ basic personalities, where do they come from? At the most basic, we can write from what we know, and it’s fairly easy to do. We know ourselves. What are we like? What is our history? Do we want to create an alter ego and put her into our novels?

The people we are closest to, we know them fairly well, their personalities and histories. How can they inspire us in character building? Should we create alter egos for them as well? In addition, I think about other people I have known. What makes them fun or interesting? If I know them and their experience well enough, the writing flows easily.

I find that the more complicated aspects of character building require more research. If I’m not writing about something I’m familiar with, I have to learn more, not only to understand, but to make the character authentic. But of course, it must be something that really interests and motivates me to want to learn more and write from this new knowledge.

So where am I now? In my latest work in progress, I’m drawing upon my training in ministry, things I actually experienced and things I know about because I’m steeped in this world. It’s where I have a good number of connections nowadays. What might a young seminarian be doing in her day to day life that makes her life interesting or complicated? What might her coursework look like? What might be her challenges in dating? The things I have learned over the three years I was in formation and all that I knew even before I began the process, provides the foundation for understanding my heroine’s character and habits.

But it gets even better. This past weekend I attended a conference for clergy and lay people. This is a conference I have been attending for at least nine years. Included among them were people I knew in my ordination cohort and those behind me in the process. I spoke to two of them during the course of the weekend, but I must admit I wasn’t surprised at what I heard. I have known them for about four years. Nonetheless, this is what I tweeted when I returned: folks, this is a romance novel.

The details are too juicy to divulge, but I did reflect for a bit. So yes, my two young friends are finding their way. I wish them well. Their story certainly inspires me to write!

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